Ruby_rhythm

Progressive_01

Undulation_01

Alternation_01

Alternation_02

Undulation_02

Progressive_02

Alternation_03

Progressive_03

Alternation_04

Progressive_04

Undulation_03

Undulation_04

Alternation_05

Undulation_05

Progressive_05

Comments

  1. Hi Ruby, I'll bring up some of my favorites first, then suggest an improvement that I hope might help. For your first one, I really think it does a great job of capturing an alternating rhythm. I like the angle you took your photo at but I think it could have been better if it was taken at a different time of day to get rid of those shadows. Another one I really enjoyed was progressive_04, the way the snow gently follows the lines of the tiles is a great way of representing a progressive and changing rhythm. Lastly, I think undulation_04 could have been progressive as well, I enjoy the way the spots in the snow get heavier along the right side of the frame. All in all great project and thank you for sharing.

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  2. Ruby, I really loved looking through your pictures. It appears your pictures got mixed around in the posting. I really enjoyed your undulating_03, Progressive_05, and Alternating_05. I really loved the use of shadow and light in them as well as the close perspective. The different colors of the valves were very nice to look at. I also really like the snow shots. I think Alternating_03 would have been more impactful had you found another blue foot stool for the other side to create a continuing pattern but overall I really loved looking through your photos.

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