Larissa, I really like your images for this project. I can tell that you were really using the objects around you without manipulating the subject matter. I think that zooming in or cropping some of your images could make them more effective, but your subject matter is there! It just took a moment to find it ;). I think your alternating images are great, and the space that you chose inside of a store is very unique with a lot of fun opportunities for this assignment! I think that your images “undulating 1 & 2” would have been good images for progression as well! Thanks for sharing. -Leilani Warinner
I find all your progressive and undulating rhythm photos really interesting, but the alternating ones don't feel cohesive with the rest. I think the tier of candles in progression_02 is really interesting and creates great rhythm, and would argue that your best alternating rhythm photo is actually undulation_05 (I love this photo). I also think the bands of material/texture in undulation_03 is super effective! Good job, it just seems like you had to rush the alternating ones at the end and weren't as intentional with the composition.
Larissa, I really like your images for this project. I can tell that you were really using the objects around you without manipulating the subject matter. I think that zooming in or cropping some of your images could make them more effective, but your subject matter is there! It just took a moment to find it ;). I think your alternating images are great, and the space that you chose inside of a store is very unique with a lot of fun opportunities for this assignment! I think that your images “undulating 1 & 2” would have been good images for progression as well! Thanks for sharing.
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ReplyDeleteI find all your progressive and undulating rhythm photos really interesting, but the alternating ones don't feel cohesive with the rest. I think the tier of candles in progression_02 is really interesting and creates great rhythm, and would argue that your best alternating rhythm photo is actually undulation_05 (I love this photo). I also think the bands of material/texture in undulation_03 is super effective! Good job, it just seems like you had to rush the alternating ones at the end and weren't as intentional with the composition.